I could lock myself
In a room,
And never come out.
I could curl up
In the corner~
Pull a blanket
Over my head,
And disappear.
I could dig a big hole
In the yard,
Jump in and
Pull a pile of
Leaves over
My head,
Hoping you do
Not notice me.
I could submerge in a
Murky pond,
Using a reed to
Bring in air
From above~
Lying just below
The surface.
I would
Let my mind
Disconnect from
The intrusion
Of sensory
Information.
I could let go of my
Mind and responsibilities
And see what happens.
I choose not to do these things.
I choose to remain.
My interactions with you
And the rest of the world
Sap my strength
Daily.
i Love it. I really understand it too 🙂
brilliant. and i relate. love you!
Can totally relate. Love the imagery of the reed/air.
lovely imaginations here,
glad to see your words stretch and bend and make powerful impressions here.
Happy Rally.
Awesome write. I take it you’d like to be alone?
When you are in dumps, feels like dumping everything. Nice.
cool lines….
masterful delivery on this one.
Awww. I can relate. Lovely, lovely write. 🙂
the formatting helped, nice work!!!
Introverts unite! Er… celebrate alone.
Erase myself and my striped tail like a Cheshire cat.
I can relate to your sentiments.
simple beautiful imagery
notice that you won the perfect poet award for poets rally week 57, welcome take it,
truly enjoyed your lasting support.
keep rocking.
smiles.
xoxox
I like the direct, concise expressions of how you feel. There’s a rhythm to it which I enjoy. Then you end with a positive note – to fight it all “I chose to remain”!
Yes,,,we all feel that way some time…however we keep truckin’ along and it takes courage.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/07/wisping-snow/
Well, it’s infinitely better to remain and keep trying to find our place then to give up, that’s for sure. The days can be hard though. I enjoyed the reflectiveness of this piece and the specific images/situations you’ve used to express the emotion behind the words…very nice.
lovely poem, love the sentiments… 🙂
A choice poem.beautiful writing
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Absolutely beautiful. Your writing is deeply moving.