Pressure causes

B R E A K D O W N~

The leaves underfoot

On a fall day~crunch

Snap~ The

Leaves under my

Foot on a fall

Day begin

Decay~or are

Helped on

The Way.


Pressure causes

B R E A K D O W N~

The weight we

Carry of atmosphere

And pressure pushing

Us down as

Leaves underfoot

On a fall day.


Pressure causes

B R E A K D O W N~

Determination causes

R E B I R T H.




~Keep Walking


About ~Drew

I am a survivor of childhood torture. Each day, I put one foot in front of the other, moving forward. To do any less would spell my own destruction. My music/poetry/prose deal with the devastating effect of this kind of abuse on a human being: me. My experiences/thoughts/ideas/misconceptions are exposed here for all to see. Here. I am lain bare, naked, hidden only be the cloak of anonymity.
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4 Responses to B R E A K D O W N

  1. Layers of meaning…strong poetry.

  2. Vivid images. I could visualise autumn it’s height when every fallen leaf and twig snap under our feet. Liked the idea of rebirth at the end. Good work.


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